Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Loneliness: When I feel so Lonely

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When I feel so
Lonely
I make sure
To call you,
Cry as much as I want to
And then
Get going

When I feel lonely
I seek no shoulder,
But yours
To rest on for a while
And then
Get going

I don’t mind
Feeling
Lonely,
As long as
You are there
For me

Your thoughts
Fill the entire gap
We have between us

Your feelings
about me
Act as a strong
Bridge between the
Two of us.

6 comments:

  1. Lonly ness is killer. Just a very good expression

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  2. sweet poem-"I don't mind feeling lonely as long as you are there for me" sort of sums up the feeling of the poet,

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  3. Good lines...Lucid n appealing (: (:

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  4. Loneliness is something I fear. I like my quiet time but dread this. Enjoyed the feelings you have shared and loved this line I don’t mind
    Feeling
    Lonely,
    As long as
    You are there
    For me

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  5. Very beautiful lines...solitude expressed well.

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  6. nice piece! Brazilian Kisses :-)

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